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Shadows in Woodend
Legends of Arvalast, No. 1

by Peter J. Dudek

      Peter J. Dudek has begun a powerful allegory in the first installment of the Legends of Arvalast series. Shadows in Woodend is a compelling story of the growing evil within the land of Arvalast, and the players, good and bad, who are destined to square off to determine which has dominance over the country. Woodend, a bustling walled city in the northern region of the land of Arvalast, is the last holdout of the wielders of light, but even it is becoming more corrupted each day. Gildareth, the herald of the King of Arvalast, has been sent to the city to warn its governor, Willerdon, of the encroaching evil and to enlist his aid in encouraging the townspeople to use their flasks of light, the Illumina, to combat the darkness that is coming. Three boys are caught up in the midst of growing tensions within the city, and upon them rests the fate of the bearers of light. There is political intrigue, domestic turmoil, supernatural battles with demons, and the mystery of the Illumina within an ageless story of good and evil.

Dudek creates strong characters and builds a complex plot. The Christian overtones that Dudek readily admits are present in the work are a bit obvious. For example, any reference to the King of Arvalast is done in capital letters, including all pronouns, as one would refer to God, whereas other characters are not treated as such. If Dudek had made this a bit more subtle, the Christian symbolism would still be there, and the work would have a wider appeal as does C. S. Lewis's The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, which is also a Christian allegory and a battle between good and evil.

Unfortunately, Shadows in Woodend leaves the reader hanging in the middle of the action, not knowing what will happen next. Unlike the Lord of the Rings trilogy, which resolves some of the questions of plot in each book and leaves the reader with a sense of purpose restored (an ending of sorts) before continuing on the road to Mordor, this book just stops at a crucial time in the story. That makes me feel that this book is really a section of a greater work, like a clearly marked "Book I," in a large novel. Instead, it was published as a separate book but seems unfinished as one.

In all fairness, that response may be due to the fact that I'm desperate to find out what happens to all of the characters that I have come to know in Shadows in Woodend and I want to find out what happens next. So, my message to Peter Dubek is: Finish the next installment and get it out to the public because we want to know what happens!

The Book

Publish America
March 2005
Trade paperback
1-4137-6074-0
Fantasy [Age Group: 8 to adult]
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The Reviewer

Janie Franz
Reviewed 2005
NOTE: Reviewer Janie Franz is the author of Freelance Writing: It’s a Business, Stupid!, Relaxation Techniques for Children, Relaxation Techniques for Adults; Co-author of The Ultimate Wedding Reception Book and The Ultimate Wedding Ceremony Book. Coming Soon: The Ultimate Wedding Workbook, Get Rich on Love, and Sacred Breath (a sound recording of relaxation meditations).
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