A
Complete Woman
By Nicole Givens Kurtz
Mocha Memoirs Press - December 2001
ISBN: 1-59113-052-2 - Paperback
Fiction / African American
Reviewed by: Alvin Romer, MyShelf.com
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A Complete Woman is a story of one woman's fight to find
herself amidst angst and trepidation. Throw in the trials and tribulations
of five other characters and you have total chaos! The author, Nicole
Givens Kurtz, deals in stereotypical fashion in detailing devastating
emotional turmoil and the struggle mentally for answers to questions not
readily available in the loss of the ability to bear children. This should
have been the crux of this story along with a compelling message for hope
and justification to give the readership a better storyline. Tracy Johnson
the protagonist, has had yet another miscarriage, her third. In her estimation
and view of things, this is not the epitomy of a complete woman as she
labors to realistically find herself despite being in the middle of problems
happening to her friends... who likewise are trying to find the formula
for completeness. This book would appeal to those women that may have
experienced this type of ordeal.
The characterization for the book
leans heavily on the sameness for each individual portrayed with not enough
diversity to help move and pace the story. There seems to be too much
going on in a book with only 136 pages. One would've hoped that extending
the book to add space and wherewithal for more plot would be daunting,
if not a major improvement. One of the brighter points, though, is the
dialogue and narrative style that lends a lot to Ms Kurtz command of street
jargon.
If the author's intent was to weave
believability in this effort at completeness, perhaps the next effort
would give her readership more anticipation of a complete book.
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