Carol Kluz usually writes suspense novels under the name Carol Randy or offers advice to new writers, as in her
Finding Go! Matching Questions and Resources in Getting Published, co-written with Gary Kessler. This
spring, she launched a new fantasy series, the Fifth Age Chronicles, of which The Chosen of Azar is the first.
It is the story of the search and training of five young people prophesied to be the saviors of the world, in
a conflict between the forces of good and the forces of evil. When the five Chosen are found in different parts
of the realm, their discovery not only produces changes within each of the children themselves, as they find
their magic, but it also spurs changes within all the kingdoms. Going to war at any time and in any age will
naturally produce change, but the Chosen's presence and those of their teachers and caretakers also dramatically
change the lives of everyone they meet. Street urchins are rescued and adopted, giants are given an important
mission to do, and inhabitants of Haven's Hold, where the Barrand Guards and the Sect are training the Chosen,
are forced to look at long-held protocols.
The Chosen also must develop their new abilities and train to combat Condragon, the embodiment of evil in the
land, and his minions. The Chosen must learn discipline and how to respect their teachers and caregivers as they
become part of a new family. They also must find talismans to help them defeat Condragon.
I enjoyed reading The Chosen of Azar. It was full of adventure and the trials of youth. I also got a
feel for the world Kluz created. The characters were interesting and believable, and the beasts and demons were
challenging.
I did find a lot of the book seemed rushed, as if the author had a lot to say but was in a hurry to get it all
down without fleshing out some of it. I also had trouble when new characters (especially, beasts and demons) were
introduced. Kluz would have them pop up and then the beast's name was used as if we already knew it, instead of
introducing the beast with description and then saying that it was a Churl or other type of creature or having
someone else call it by name. I found this style made the reading bumpy and not as smooth as it could be.
I do, however, look forward to future books in this series.